I hope I can make my language abilities better and improve my hospitality ability at the Department of Foreign Language in the National Kaohsiung University of Hospitality and Tourism. In order to get myself more well-prepared for my future career - a tourist guide. I choose the best hospitality colleague as my first choice. Because I think with the professional teachers and wonderful facilities, I can become a good tourist guide as I dream.
In the first year in this university, I hope I can improve my English oral speaking skill and talk to foreigner face to face without fear. Besides, I hope I would also learn Japanese well and speak Japanese fluently. Moreover, I hope I can apply my oral ability into hospitality industry and make myself more competitive. In addition, if I have choice to learn more languages, I will try my best to become master on them. Furthermore, I want to take some courses about hospitality.
In the second year in this university, I hope I can take some proficiency test and get tourist guide qualification. Besides, I want to have some choice to practice in some companies, which can make me become more experienced. Moreover, I can learn some professional skills in my fieldwork.
In the third and fourth year in this university, I hope I can go study abroad for short term to broaden my horizon. Additionally, I can learn something about foreign cultures or life styles. Then, I can use my language abilities to live in another country.
In the future, I will try my best to achieve these goals which I setted up step by step. Apart from this, I hope I can have wonderful life in the university.
我覺得你寫的好棒欸!!:))))))))
回覆刪除首段我已經很喜歡了,你還用in the first, second, third year這種方法寫,很有抱負的感覺!!(((讚)))
最後結尾也整個很完整~~
進步好多欸=ˇ=
and talk to foreigner -->and talk to foreigners
回覆刪除I hope I would also learn-->這是有可能的未來呀 所以用現在式就好了
Besides, I hope I would also learn Japanese well and speak Japanese fluently.
這句寫完可以寫因為學會應用更多語言 對未來的工作有幫助
這篇真的很棒耶 很明確說出上大學要幹麻!!
第二段的improve 可以寫polish 換句話說 避免重複:D
回覆刪除if I have choice to learn more languages
是chance吧 xDD
I will try my best to become master on them.
這裡我覺得怪怪的 你看一下吧
而且阿 你這篇文章真的很完整很詳細 我很喜歡:">
要想你多多學習
對了 你最後一句可以加I hope I can be admitted to ~
最後一句 I hope I can have wonderful life
回覆刪除have 後面少加 a
這篇不錯阿 連大學4年的讀書計畫都寫到了 如果是我 一定會錄
取你>v< 繼續保持~~