When it comes to self-evaluation, I have a lot of advantages and abilities. As for my personality, I am an optimistic and easy-going person. Because I always look at the blight side even when I met some difficult challenges. Besides, I have strong sense of responsibility. Furthermore, I am curious to everything I am interest and always want to know more about it. Moreover, I am moderate and friendly. In addition, I am frugal and like to deposit regular.
As for my abilities and specialty, I can speak English and Japanese. However, I take part in some qualification examination in English. For example, I passed some qualification examinations. Although I am not major in Japanese, I can say some simple term. Besides, I will practice it well in the future. In addition, I can do some word processing. Furthermore, I can play the piano. Moreover, I take part in some piano computations and qualification examinations.
As for my interest, I like to play the piano and listen some music which can make me become more relax. Besides, I like to read some books, novels and magazines which can broaden my horizon. Moreover, I like to surf the Internet which can make me know more about Japanese culture and information. In addition, I like to travel which can make me know more about local culture and see some beautiful views. Furthermore, I like to go to museum to see some exhibitions.
整體有互相呼應,還不錯,不過你在看完咪咪的之後是不是會覺得你少了點什麼,就是會太平鋪直敘,沒瞎咪重點的FEEL
回覆刪除然後結尾不太好,太忽然了@@
Because I always look at the blight side even when I met some difficult challenges
回覆刪除--> Because I always look on the blight side even when I meet ~
Besides, I have strong sense of responsibility.-->這句講完好簡短 可以舉例
However, I take part in some qualification examination in English.
為什麼是however而不是 moreover
For example, I passed some qualification examinations.
可以打出確切的名稱
listen some music --> listen to some music
結尾可以再收得更好一點 小總結之類的
這篇寫得很棒唷~有很多能力的感覺
look at the blight side 是 look on the blight side
回覆刪除責任感後面可以加上一些例子喔
這篇 我覺得還不錯喔 哈哈 越來越棒了:-*
一起加油喽
look at the blight(植物枯萎) side
回覆刪除是look "on" the "bright" side
第二段However, I take part in some qualification examination in English
改成moreover語意比較通順
最後一句讓人覺得好像沒有結束~改一下比較好喔