Explaining a Process-2

  It is a experiment to show that balck is a better collector of  solar energy than white. First of all, you have to prepare 2 tin cans, some black paint, some white paint and a room thermometer. Then, you should follow some processes to conduct this solar energy experiment. First, paint the one balck can and one white can. Secend, fill the cans with water. Third, put the cans in direct sunlight for three hours. Then, check the temperature of the water in the cans and compare. Finally, you will notice the temperature of the water in the black can is higher that means the black is a better collector of  solar energy than white. To conclude with, do some experiment can find some interesting knowledge in your daily life.

Explaining a Process-1

   It is easy to pot a plant if you follow the night procedure. First, cover bottom of pot with small stones . Secend, put two inches of soil on top of rocks. Third, make a hole in center of soil. Besides, drop plant into soil. Then, add soil until it almost reaches top of pot. Furthermore, press soil down with thumbs. Finally, don' t forget to water plant. To conclude with, just to be your best to take good care of your plant.

Revised 1-The unforgetable travel

   Traveling is a wonderful entertainment, and almost everyone like to take a trip, and I have no exception. Once I took a trip to Tokyo. It was the most unforgettable travel that I ever had. On the first day of the travel, I was a little bit frightened as a result of my fist time visiting an unfamiliar place. Though I loved Japan very much, it was untangle due to the language barrier. All I could say is "Excuse me" and "Thank you", it was dangerous if I met any trouble and it was not enough for me to ask for help by means of my poor Japanese. On the second day of the travel, I felt more safer because I found Japanese English were good. Even the elderly man could say some simple English. Then I went to a lot of wonderful landmarks. I felt pleasure for all things in this good experience. After this unforgettable experience, I learn more about travel. Most of all, I know that I don't have to worry too much before the things about language happen. After all, things will work out.

The unforgetable travel

    Last year, I went to Tokyo. It was the most unforgettable travel that I had have. At the first day of the travel, I felt scary because I went to a strange country. Thought I love Japen very much, it was intranquil due to the language barrier. All I could say are "Excuse me" and "Thank you", it was dangerous if I met any trouble then I couldn't ask for help. At the second day of the travel, I felt more safer because I found Japanese's English were good. Even the eldly man could say the sample dialogue. However, I went to a lot of wanderful landmarks. I felt pleasure for all things in this good experience. After this unforgetable experience, I learn more knowldge about travel. The most of all, I know that I don't have to worry to much before the things happen. After all, things will work out.

Revised 1-A good experience

  I once lived in Taipei, and worked as a volunteer in a hospital. It was really such a wonderful experience to earn the opportunity to help people who were in need. Every time when I helped those who was in need, I will felt good about what I do. One morning an elderly woman was sent to the hospital, and she was badly hurt by a car. However, the driver who hit her by the car said that she rushed to the middle of the road. The police felt that it was strange of the woman to do such odd behavior. After they found her son, they realized that the woman’s family was so poor that she wanted to kill herself to lighten the burden. Therefore, the woman wanted to kill herself to lighten the burden. After I heard this story, I think she was a person who needed helps. So I always bought something useful for her and talked to her. Consequently, she became more optimistic about her life. It was a good experience for me to realize that helping people was a happy thing.

A good experience

   I once lived in Taipei, and worked as a volunteer in a hospital. It really felt good to get the opportunities to help people. One morning an elderly woman was sent to the hospital, she was badly hart by the car. But the driver said that she was rush to the middle of the road. The police felt that was strange for the woman to do it. After they called for her son, they realized that the woman’s family was poor. So the woman wanted to kill herself to lighten the burden. After I heard this story, I always bought something for her and talked to her. And she was more optimistic for her life. It was a good experience for me to realize that helping people was a happy thing.