revise-describing a person

    My three-year-old little brother got lost few weeks ago during our family trip to the U.K. When we went to the British Museum, he was excited and ran everywhere. When it was time for us to leave, we found he was gone. All my family were really worried about him. Therefore, we wrote this note or short description to find him. His name is John Lin. Besides, he is petite. Also, his hair is short, light blond and curly. When he smiles, there are two dimples on his cheeks.  He has big eyes and a small nose which make he looks like a doll. Moreover, he wore bright yellow T-shirt, blue jeans, and a cap. Please help me to find him. My number is 09815732. Please call to me if you get any news about her. I'll repay you at all costs to find him.

Comparing 2

  Great man usually had same contribution in their life. They were do something meaningful or some revolution. Take John Adams and Thomas Jefferson for example, John and Thomas were important person in the American Revolution. They both hoped to make the U.S. become independence.John delegated to the Continental Congress. Similarity, Thomas delegated to the Continental Congress. John was the singer of Declaration and so did Thomas. Both John and Thomas studied and practiced law. It made good foundation for them to become the president of  U.S. The most important of all, they both set up the excellent model for generations. Moreover, their sprite will live on forever.

Comparing 1

  There was an interesting thing which happened in 2011 annual driver's license test. After the licenses sent to their owner, something mistaken happened. Several weeks ago,  after Alabama State Department of Motor Vehicles sent the licenses. Two woman who got wrong licenses went to their office and complained about this mistake. Originally, their license were almost alike to each other. They were Stephanie Brooks and Ann Friedman who almost looked alike. Stephanie's eye color was similar to Ann's. Stephanie's hair color was black. Likewise, Ann's hair color was black. Both Stephanie and Ann were 5'3" height. Stephanie's birthday was 7/31/70. Similarly,  Ann's birthday was 7/31/70. After this unexpected met with each other, Stephanie and Ann became friends. In addition, they also planned to have a big birthday party together.

My Favorite Holiday

    Chinese New Year is the most important holiday to Chinese people. Everyone in my country are except for this holiday. There are some reasons why we feel joyful in this special holiday. First, we can meet all of our family members on the big dinner which celebrates this holiday. Due to the custom everyone should have a reunion in this special day. Second, we can travel during these wonderful holiday because there are a lot of benefits which provide by theme parks during those days. Third, we can get some blessing from our elderly family members which can bless us for a whole year. Then, we can take a break and relax from our busy days. This traditional holiday is very meaningful for Chinese people. In addition, we can learn a lot from it, so  Chinese New Year is my favorite holiday.

Describing a person

  My 3-year-old little brother got lost during our family trip to the U.S. few weeks ago. When we went to the British Museum, he was excited and ran from here to there. After we wanted to leave, we found he was gone. All my families was really worry about him. Therefore, we wrote this announcement to find him. His name is John Lin. Besides, he is short and petite. Then, his hair is short, light blond and curly. When he smiles, there are two dimple on his cheek. I really miss his lovely smile very much. He has big eyes and small nose which let he look like a doll. Moreover, he wore bright yellow T-shirt and blue jeans with a cap. Please help me to look for him. I'll repay you at all costs.

Describing a Process-(4)-How to plan a trip

    Taking a trip can make your life become more colorful. Nevertheless how to plan a trip is important for you to feel relax during the trip. First, you have to decide your distination and try to find some information about this place.  A good place will affect your mood during the trip. Secend, you can choose your transportation and buy some tickets. Try to consider about price and convenience. Besides, don't forget to reservate hotal. Then, you should pack your bag and bring enough money with you. Finally, keep a good mood and try to photo some good pictures. After follow those tips, you will have a good travel experience that you never have.

Explaining a Process-3

  In order to get from Graff House to the Free Quaker Meeting House, follow these directions. First go east two blocks from the Graff House. Then turn right on Sixth Street. Continue one block on Sixth Street. The Free Quaker Meeting House is on your right side.