2011年4月27日 星期三

revise-describing a person

    My three-year-old little brother got lost few weeks ago during our family trip to the U.K. When we went to the British Museum, he was excited and ran everywhere. When it was time for us to leave, we found he was gone. All my family were really worried about him. Therefore, we wrote this note or short description to find him. His name is John Lin. Besides, he is petite. Also, his hair is short, light blond and curly. When he smiles, there are two dimples on his cheeks.  He has big eyes and a small nose which make he looks like a doll. Moreover, he wore bright yellow T-shirt, blue jeans, and a cap. Please help me to find him. My number is 09815732. Please call to me if you get any news about her. I'll repay you at all costs to find him.
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  1. 金龍2011年5月4日 晚上11:10

    1.When it was time for us to leave, we found he was gone, we found he was gone.
    -->When it was time for us to leave, we found he was gone.

    2. Then, his hair is short, light blond and curly.
    -->Also, his hair is short, light blond and curly.

    3.I miss his lovely smile very much.
    -->刪除,與主題無關.

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