Expressing an opinion-2

     We students are always complaining about wearing uniforms in the school. Furthermore, some of us even take action to against it. However, wearing uniforms in the school has a lot of benefits for ourselves. In my opinion, I support to wear uniforms in  the school. First of all, we don't have to worry about our dressing and we can focus on our homework. Besides, it can keep us from dangerous when we are in the school. Due to if some villain went into our school, teacher can notice that right away. Moreover, it represent our identity and we will do things after thinking twice when we are in uniforms. It is often argued that it is inconvenient about wearing uniforms in the school. However, I think wearing uniforms in the school is our duty. Taking into account all of these reasons, one must conclude that it is good for us to wear uniforms.

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    People issue about meeting people through online dating sites or not for a while. Other considers it's dangerous to talk to strangers face to face, but the others thinks it's OK to make friends. In my opinion, I am in favor of meeting people through online dating sites. Due to you can make friends from another countries and practice your language oral abilities. Besides, it's secure if you have company by your family or friends when you meet people through online dating sites. Moreover, you can keep yourself from menace if you try to promote your sense of crisis when you meet people through online dating sites. While it is true that many people meet some danger when they meet people through online dating sites. I believe if you do this more carefully, you will enjoy about it. Because of these facts, it is self-evident that meeting people through online dating sites is not always dangerous.

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    Great men usually have made some great contribution to their lives. They did something meaningful or some revolution. Taking John Adams and Thomas Jefferson for example, they were important persons in the American Revolution. They both hoped to make the U.S. become an independent country. John john was the delegate  to the Continental Congress. Similarity, Thomas john was the delegate to the Continental Congress. John was the signer of Declaration and so was Thomas. Both John and Thomas studied and practiced law, which laid a good foundation for them to become the president of U.S. The most important of all, they both set up the excellent model for generations. Moreover, their spirit will live on forever.

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     There was an interesting thing which happened in 2011's annual drivers' licenses test. After the licenses  were sent to their owner, something failure occurred. Several weeks ago, after Alabama State Department of Motor Vehicles sent the licenses, two women who got wrong licenses went to their office and complained about this mistake. To their surprise, their licenses were almost alike . They are Stephanie Brooks and Ann Friedman who almost looked alike. Furthermore, Stephanie's eyes color was similar to Ann's. Moreover, Her hair color was as black as Ann's.  Both Stephanie and Ann were 5'3" height. Stephanie's birthday was 7/31/70. Similarly,  Ann's birthday was 7/31/70.  After this unexpected encounter with each other, Stephanie and Ann became friends. In addition, they even also planned to have a big birthday party together.

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    Our university is hiring a new English instructor for the school this year. After we issued this notice, we get two resumes from two eligible people for this job. After think twice, we decide to hire Debra Fines. There are some points, why we decided to hire her. First of all, Debra has more education than Lynn. Those experience can help her to teach more professional knowledge for our students. Besides, Debra has variety employment experience, while Lynn doesn't. Those experience may help her to show how professional she is. Moreover, Debra has some publication, but Lynn doesn't. That she can help our students to improve their writing abilities. The last but not the least, unlike Lynn, Debra is good at swimming. That we can ask her as a coach to train our school team to get awards. Although Lynn is a good teacher, we think Debra is more suitable to this position. The final decision will publish after we discuss in the meeting.

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    Girls are interested in being princesses in their childhood, including me. Disney princess series movies are also the staple in girl's daily life. Why those animation movies are so charming and attract for little girls. Below is the list of similarities between the two princess series movies. First of all, Sleepbeauty has beautiful princess and handsome prince. Similarly, Cinderella has beautiful princess and handsome prince. Besides, Sleepbeauty and Cinderella both has some plots about the brave prince save the poor prince. Moreover, Sleepbeauty was adapt from the famous fairytale. Likewise, Cinderella  was adapt from the famous fairytale. On the other hand, Sleepbeauty is as well-known as Cinderella. The last but not the least,  all the characters in the Sleepbeauty are alike those in the Cinderella. Both of them are pretty and cute.  To sum up, why those princess series animation movies are so popular. I think that are due to their happy ending.

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    It's a new begin for my friend and me to become the freshman in the university. Thought it's a good news for us to begin our new life, it also involves some problems for us to search a new house. Therefore, we search on the Net and find two apartments which are both near our campus. In addition, we make some contrast below. First of all, Fairfax Apartments has 2 large bedroom for each of us to use. However, CAMPUS APTS only has 1 bedroom. Moreover, Fairfax Apartments has air condition and all the furnish, while CAMPUS APTS doesn't include those benefits. Besides, Fairfax Apartments doesn't allow to keep pets. On the other hand, CAMPUS APTS is pets allowed.  Unlike Fairfax Apartments, CAMPUS APTS is available immediately. The last but not the least, Fairfax Apartments' rent is 1250 dollars per a month and involves all utilities. In contrast,  CAMPUS APTS' rent is 900 dollars each month but needs to plus utilities. There are a lot of merits for us to decide which one is more suitable for us. We'll make the decision after we think twice.

REVISE-My Favorite Holiday

    Chinese New Year is the most important holiday for Chinese people. Everyone in my country are looking forward to this holiday, including me. There are some reasons why I feel joyful on such a special holiday. First of all, I can meet all of our family members on the reunion meal in order to celebrate this holiday. Due to the custom, everyone should have a reunion on this special day. Moreover, I can go outside during the wonderful holiday because there are a lot of benefits which is provided by theme parks during this day. Additionally, I can get some benedictions from our elderly family members which can bless us for a whole year. Finally, I can take a break and keep out of busy days. This traditional holiday is very meaningful for Chinese people. In addition, I can learn how to maintain our Chinese culture, so  Chinese New Year is my favorite holiday.

Revise-describing a Process-(4)-How to plan a trip

  Taking a trip can make your life more colorful. Nevertheless, planning a trip is important for you to relax during the trip. First, you have to decide your destination and try to get the specific information about this place and collect relative information.  A good place will lead you to a good temper during the trip. Second, you can choose your transportation and buy some tickets. Try to compare about prices and convenience. Besides, don't forget to reserve rooms at a hotel. Then, you should pack luggage and bring enough money with you. Finally, keep a good mood and try to take some great pictures. After following these, you will have a good travel experience that you have never had.