revise-discussing cause-1

    I'm a business administration student. I have been asked to analyze a case about a closed music store. Below is a list of the reasons for why I think about it. First of all, its location didn't have enough population. In my opinion, he should choose a place near the shopping mall or the train station. Secondly, the owner of this music shop spent too much money on buying CDs for his shop. I think he can buy some second-handed CDs to reduce his budget. Besides, most kinds of the CDs were hip-hop and rock which can only draw some specific groups. Maybe he can buy some pop music which can attract more people. Furthermore, he sold per CD for 15 dollars, which was too cheap to earn money from selling them. In addition, he didn't provide the service to the customer who paid by checks and credit cards. Moreover, he hired too many clerks for his shop which may increase his financial burden.  The last but not the least, his work time is from 1 to 5p.m on Monday to Friday, which is the main problem about his failure. Due to the hours his shop worked didn't correspond to the rush hours; as a result, he couldn't bring more people to his shop. I suggest the owner should think twice before he plans to open a shop;otherwise, he will fail to his next investment.