2011年6月10日 星期五

Revised-Expressing an opinion-1

    People discuss about meeting people through online dating sites for a while. Some consider it's dangerous to talk to strangers face to face, but others think it's OK to make friends. In my opinion, I am in favor of meeting people through online dating sites.First of all, there are some benefits such as making friends from another country through the website, you can practice speaking English as well as typing. Besides, it's secure if you have your family' s or friends' company when you meet people through online dating sites. Moreover, you can keep yourself from menace if you try to promote your sense of crisis when you meet people through online dating sites. While it is sure enough that many people meet some danger when they meet people getting into online dating sites. I believe if you do this more carefully, you will learn a lot about it. According to these facts, it is self-evident that meeting people through online dating sites is not always dangerous.

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  1. 1.First of all, there are some benefits such as making making friends from another country through the website, you can practice your English speaking as well as typing.
    -->First of all, there are some benefits such as making friends from another country through the website, you can practice speaking English as well as typing.

    2.While it is sure enough that many people meet some danger when they meet people get into online dating sites.
    -->While it is sure enough that many people meet some danger when they meet people getting into online dating sites.

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