2011年6月10日 星期五
Revised-Expressing an opinion-2
We students are always complaining about wearing uniforms in the school. In addition, some of students even take action against it. However, wearing uniforms in the school has a lot of benefits for us. In my opinion, I support wearing uniforms in the school. First of all, we don't have to worry about our dressing and we can focus on our homework. Besides, it can keep us from danger when we are in the school. As a result, if some villains enter our school, teachers can notice them right away. Moreover, it represents our identities, and therefore, we will do things after thinking twice when we are in uniforms. It is often argued that it is inconvenient to wear uniforms in the school. While, I think wearing uniforms in the school is student' s duty and responsibility. Taking all of these reasons into account, one must conclude that it is good for us to wear uniforms.
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1.Furthermore, some of us even take action to against it.
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2.Besides, it can keep us from dangerous when we are in the school.
-->Besides, it can keep us from danger when we are in the school.
3.As a result, if some villains went into our school, teachers can notice that right away.
-->As a result, if some villains enter our school, teachers can notice them right away.